Where Ralston chooses to rest is fine, more or less; it's the suggestion of moving Kirigan's torpid body that sucks all the humour out of his expression.
"You will not touch me for any reason," he says, with a sudden severity that may seem incongruous to his restful posture until one notes the closed fists resting on his knees, knuckles up. "Is that clear?"
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"You will not touch me for any reason," he says, with a sudden severity that may seem incongruous to his restful posture until one notes the closed fists resting on his knees, knuckles up. "Is that clear?"